I'm Moving To a Place

by Bradley Peter   Jan 24, 2008


So I'm moving to a place
Where the people aren't like sheep
Where I can do what I like
And my dreams are mine to keep

Yeah, I'm moving to a place
Where the smiles are all around
Where there's no posers in sight
And the sadness can't be found

Yeah, I'm moving to a place
Do you want to move with me
Where nobody can stop us
From being what we want to be

So I'm moving to a place
Somewhere I haven't been
Where I don't know the people
And I can see what I haven't seen

Yes I'm moving to a place
Where colors flood the street
And the music, it moves me
And I'm allowed to tap my feet

Yes I'm moving to a place
You couldn't stop me if you tried
Because I'm moving to a place
Where the people walk with pride

You can say that I'm wrong
You can say I'm too young to know
You can say what you want
But I'm still going to go

Because I'm moving to a place
And I'm moving there tonight
So hand me my sunglasses
Because the future's looking bright

So I'm moving to a place
Where chances fall from the sky
And the people, they love it
And no one questions why

Yes I'm moving to a place
Don't you stop me, don't you dare
I'm going to live my life
Where living life's a lot more fair

So I'm moving to a place
And leaving all this crap behind
You can say what you like
But you'll never change my mind

So I'm moving to a place
So goodbye, perhaps for good
Because I'm moving to a place
Where I'm a lot more understood

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  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Just like all your other poems, the ryhming is great and the flow is so smooth.great job on this.5/5
    **harlea
    p.s. thankz for the comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. I love the way you painted a pic for your readers. Awesome job.
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    TAKE ME WITH YOU!!!! :P lol. this is a great poem. i really liked it a lot. it flowed welll and painted an image of where i wanna be. thank you for the comment on mine as well.

    butterfly kisses and bear hugz

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's a very very well written piece of poetry. It's possible that the word 'and' and 'so' were overused just a little, but not too severly. I liked so many stanzas in this that I refuse to copy and paste them all in here. I like the line about handing you the sunglasses because the future's looking bright. So much of this poem is easy to relate to and draws the reader in. The fact that you never state where you are going or if in fact it's a literal place is really great. It leaves that up to the reader. Nice job!
    Charisma*