Dear Sarah

by EssenceOfLace   Jan 25, 2008


She runs and she hides
She screams and she cries
But she never ceases to exist.

She's warped and she's torn
She's hated, she's scorned,
And she never seems to be missed.

She's loved and she's lost,
She's been beaten, been tossed,
Till tears ran down to her bloody lips.

She's tired, she's sick,
She's giving up, forgetting this,
Making a suicide you'll never forget.

~

She writes a note
Slits her wrists
Painting the walls red.

"Forgive me father,
I have sinned,
Please take the blood I shed.

I give myself to you dear Jesus,
Will you take my hand?

You are the only one who loves me now,
Everyone else wants me dead..."

~

"Come to me child,
into my loving arms,
Everything will be okay, Dear Sarah,
No longer will you be in harm."

She's finally safe...

*I am actually an Atheist. I really have no idea where this came from. I just began writing, and this is what it ended up as*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    It's got kind of this creepy sing-songy depression thing going for it that's very hard to put into words. Like what you'd hear in a horror movie, I guess. I could picture her "painting the walls red" frantically, finally giving up. The emotions I was feeling while reading this were tense, and scared, but at the end relieved. The entire poem was great. If I were you, I might consider revising the last line. It sort of feels out of place. Just a suggestion. Otherwise, excellent job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Well keep on writing that was great!

  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    This poem is really good, i think it's my favorite so far! Well done, beautifully written! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlEeDiNg FoR tHe OnE i LoVe

    Absolutely amazing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    That was flawless in every sense of the word! Your rhythms were perfect, your choice of words were amazing and you message just wow. That was so clear and every word rolled of the lips.!

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