HEART ACHES

by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT   Jan 26, 2008


This is true and I witness, and my girl and I put out da truth talking in to this.. IT'S WORTH READING THIS!

You and I have been together so long, we fight through pain and made it strong happines
And this what I turn out to have a broken heart, cause you left me for good and you came back

Guy:I miss you

Girl: wateva

Guy: baby, stop acting like that

Girl: get over it, please

Guy: I am sorry if I left you but I rerget it and shouldn't have done that

Girl: good!

Guy: you used to be lovable and turn out like you don't care what I say anymore

Girl: yeah, that's me and just going have to deal wit it forever

Guy: wait, didn't you said forever?

Girl: yeah, why?

Guy: umm baby, I want you back, please. I am so SORRY! I am so DUMB AND PLEASE TAKE ME BACK!

Girl: stop calling me your baby, cause I am not and no, I don't want you back.

Guy: tell me how you feel and I do whatever to take you back with me

Girl: u want to know how I am feeling?

Guy: yes baby, please tell me and it must be there to tell me u love me!

Girl: well, I loved you

Guy: I love you too

Girl: but it is the past

Guy: u just said you love me

Girl: I have

Guy: you don't love me anymore

Girl: sorry, u wasted my life to be with you so long

Guy: BABY, LISTEN TO ME! I won't ever leave you or break you heart again! Give me ONE MORE CHANCE, I DESERVE SECOND CHANCE, RIGHT!?

Girl: yes, you deserve your second chance but YOU deserve something else

Guy: what I deserve, anything I should deserve is to be with you

Girl: you deserve to hear this

Guy: speak it out!

Girl: *sliently sobb, hitting him* I HATE YOU! HATE YOU FOR WHAT YOU DONE TO ME! I HATE THE WAY YOU PUT MY LIFE UPSIDE DOWN! I HATE LOVING YOU AND I CAN'T STOP LOVING YOU AND I HATE YOU!

Guy: *try to hold her* I know baby, hate me, hate me for what I did to you, but why hate me so much if u still love me?

Girl: that is the point! U broke my heart! I can't trust you or believe your love anymore, why I hate you, is BECAUSE THERE'S CAN'T BE EXPLAINED and PLEASE LEAVE ME ALONE FOR GOOD!

Boy:before you leave me, listen to my poem I wrote for you

She is standing far distance away from him and he is walking closer and unfold the paper of a letter.

Boy: it's called heart ache.

To special girl I love so long
I used to tell myself I have to be strong
I realized I can't, act like nothing is wrong
I stop listening to our favorite song
Is just a heart aches
pain and happiness won't get along
I made a huge mistake
you're not here, I always stay awake
Thinking about you in many ways to keep me wake
I never cry so long, believe me, isn't fake
Is just a heart aches
I can't deal with it anymore
Please listen, my heart are sore
Please remember, I told you before
Seems our love already been tore
Can I take you back, can I be yours
I am trying to save your precious heart
Let me get you back, don't want us to be apart
Is just a horrible heart aches
I love you *no name*

She cried, never heard of him writing poem for her. She cried on my shoulder, telling me it's hard to see him like that. He walked up to her, gave her the beautiful poem. She couldn't look at him, she is afraid ending up back with him. He didn't say a word, he just stare, and he show his emotion. He cried, finally seeing the heart aches. She finally look at him and says "baby?" they hugged so hard and I cried too because I believe he deserve a second chance, lucky he gave that poem to her to show his true feelings. They are happily engaged.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Omg im crying...wow its soo good...great emotion..you captured my attention so fast...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    Wow that meant alot...There is still hope....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by stacey pearce

    Wow love it!!!! gr8 job

    stacey xoxoxoxox

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    True story?

  • 16 years ago

    by Rebecca

    That was kool .id never think of putting a peom in conv from. great idea!

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