Saying goodbye

by crystaljean88   Jan 27, 2008


I need to end this,
But how?
Loving you so long,
It hurts now.

Give me the strength,
To go.
Someway and somehow,
My love just grows.

My life is torn,
With decisions,
There so hard to make,
But with many reasons.

You don't deserve me,
I know,
But I still love you,
This shows.

I can't take this,
Hurt anymore.
I am saying goodbye,
Theres the door.

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  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    This poem is just ok.. it's short but has meaning.. it would be better if you'd expressed yourself more in your words .. this would've been a great poem...
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Thats right you dont need all he doing is holdin you back and hurting you
    keep writing!!!...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hawaiizang3l

    Good poem! You seem like a very strong, determined girl, who just keeps being thrown at with challenges that life brings. Keep strong girl!! :) i have faith in you && if you ever need to talk, just holla at me! :)

    I love reading your poems!! :) Keep it up & take care!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "I need to end this,
    But how?
    Loving you so long,
    It hurts now."

    I was deeply moved by these lines the most because I've felt this way before, as lot of people probably have and the way you put it was passionate, beautiful and creative. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I enjoyed the short lines you used here. It was effective in getting your message across and I could really relate. Well done *5/5*

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