I Am A Free Spirit

I adore the confidence in this poem. Lines like

"I am the mustang"

really painted a picture in my mind and it made me as a reader more confident which is what you want as an author. This is really a great display of what words can do for you.

I'd love to hear more about the inspiration for this poem.

--ares

"I am the mustang,
That roams the open field,
My inner fire burns,
And will only continue to build."
that is my favorite stanza ! i love the image that creates in your head : )

the poem was very good i love all the metaphors you used they made the piece very powerful 5/5 <33

Another beautiful poem. This poem itself has so much power, strength and emotions in it. I am actually at a lost for words. You really do have a very special talent and I hope that you continue to use it. The imagery again was perfect and so was the flow. Great Job! You are on your way to the top.

Letty

I like these lines da most. full of bitterness though...

"I am a free spirit,
I'll go and do what I please,
This world will never again,
Get me down on my knees. "

Keep up the good work...

Amazing poem, Daniel.

You did a wonderful job with the words, the flow, everything.

And, it's all true.