The dark maze that bleeds

by damont   Jan 30, 2008


I'm stuck in this dark maze
I'm began searching for a hit of the suns rays
i hear alot of screaming and pain
the screaming made me feel like i was going insane
i can feel thumbing like the constant beat of rain
i stand in one spot hoping for this dream to end
hoping that i can return home to my friends
i open my eyes and I'm able to see
the shining blood that surrounds me
i begin to freak looking for a way to be free
i finally see a path in this dark maze that bleeds
a path that does not scream
a path where the maze doesn't bleed
i go closer to it but the light just begins to flee
i try to follow it but its still kinda hard to see
all of a sudden I'm sweep away in a sea
i began to panic grasping to breathe
i can feel my life being pulled away from me
my spirit is flushed with anguish beyond belief
and then finally as i gave in I'm released
i can see now the sadness on the walls
i can hear a constant beat that doesn't stall
the blood that was on the wall sets the place
and the screams where just that my cries of pain
and the constant thumbing was my hearts beat
that light was my just an illusion to fool me
that light was my hope to leave
i was drowned in my own anguish and disbelief
i was set free from it when i gave in to this reality
this journey was a look inside my own body
inside the part that makes my heart beat
my heart and spirit was hurt which is quite a feat
i realize that all the pain i hold on to hurts me
it breaks me down mentally, emotionally and physically
you got to let go of the things that hurt you badly
so you won't end up like me
stuck in a dark maze that bleeds
with no hope of returning to a peaceful reality

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  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Dark
    deep
    sad
    loved it
    keep writing!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by your loving sistertwin

    That was really wonderful, i liked your rhyming...gooood

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    The title is very stong. And my attention was kept the whole time. Very well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lacey

    Wow.
    I really liked this poem.

    This was my favorite part "i finally see a path in this dark maze that bleeds
    a path that does not scream
    a path where the maze doesn't bleed
    i go closer to it but the light just begins to flee
    i try to follow it but its still kinda hard to see
    all of a sudden I'm sweep away in a sea
    i began to panic grasping to breathe
    i can feel my life being pulled away from me
    my spirit is flushed with anguish beyond belief
    and then finally as i gave in I'm released
    i can see now the sadness on the walls
    i can hear a constant beat that doesn't stall
    the blood that was on the wall sets the place
    and the screams where just that my cries of pain
    and the constant thumbing was my hearts beat
    that light was my just an illusion to fool me
    that light was my hope to leave"

    Its beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow this was good