Heart out of place

by JEFF   Feb 1, 2008


Head hurts from you bouncing around inside,
Eyes feeling pain from the strain of your cries.
Nose has scented a great amount of emotion,
Lips can't truly wait for a taste of your potion.
Neck has a cramp from a long sleepless night,
Lungs can't seem to breathe as you come into sight.
Stomach twisted into knots a fear of my first word,
Hips shake ever so slightly feeling like such a nerd.
Knees ready to give out from the load that it is bearing,
Ankles are the only thing stabilizing this body it is carrying.
Feet burning from standing so completely still,
Toes ready for the walk knowing my heart is what you will kill.

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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    It's a wonderful poem indeed
    i liked how you have put your body out there

    godd job

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Great poem. I like your style.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Loved it!! great writing keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Amazing.
    There were a couple lines that didn't seem to fit...like the were too long for the flow or something, but other than that it had a flawless flow, beautiful word choice, and your heart was in it.
    I could feel the nervousness and butterflies radiating from this. You're incredibly talented when you can make you readers feel the emotion like that.
    Well done =)
    5/5.