Daydreaming

by Letty   Feb 1, 2008


Daydreaming.

I wait patiently for the day-
That I can jump up and down,
Laughing and shouting with glee.

That will be the day-
My prince charming rides in,
Asking, "Will you marry me"?

"Yes".

I'll be so happy and joyous-
Because my day's of gloom-
Will finally be gone.

There would be no more
Feelings of lonely and emptiness,
I'll have someone to call my own.

I'll look to the future with a different eye,
And say goodbye to all my romantic daydreams.
I'll have all that I've ever wanted in life,
Someone who only has eyes for me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by peaunt

    I love this poeme

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Your flow is flawless.
    This really reminds me of a love poem I was trying to write; I think it would have been more interesting if you wrote a fantasy in your head and then at the end say something along the lines of oh it was just a daydream and then mention about the future. Personally now I like to use some mysetry and surprise when writting love pieces; like, "Star-Crossed Lovers" would be my main example. It's still a great poem though in my opinion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason

    This poem is well-written and has a slight touch of drama in a positive sense.

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