Bend Me, Break Me (contest)

by RobinAnn13   Feb 3, 2008


Bend my mind
Break my hope
Left behind
Hard to cope

Bend me never
Break me forever
Full of shame
You're to blame

Bend my will
Break my skin
Forced to Kill
Never to win

Bend me twice
Break me thrice
What you built
Made of guilt

Bend my need
Break my fears
Make me bleed
Cause the tears

Bend me, break me
Hurt me, hate me
Love you still
~Always will~

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like the form of this poem a lot along with great rhyme scheme from the beginning to the end. You managed to create interesting and excellent flow in every stanza. The emotions are expressed in a good way.
    The ending lines are very effective- truly fantastic conclusion for the whole poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. really really amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit of the forest

    I found that quite captivating, the simple structur of it and the lexical superiority you show, is a good way of getting through power an emotion, I loved it