WANTED GIRLFRIEND

by jLegendc   Feb 6, 2008


Wanted girlfriend,
I'll post this to every place,
Whoever reads it can tell their friends,
Read to them the detailed description
of the girl's face...

Straight either long or short hair,
When the wind blows it,
It gives a hypnotizing aroma to share...

Small luminous eyes,
Gazing at it will be your last,
One look will give a heart a surprise,
Finding ourselves falling so fast...

Flawless, caressable face,
Tempts anyone to touch,
Not a single make-up has left a trace,
Natural beauty that leaves me amazed...

Long or short but small nose,
Unbelievably cute to look at,
Pinching it will turn it as red as a rose,
Nothing is more adorable than that...

Seducing, luscious lips,
Signals me to kiss,
Lips meeting will start an eclipse,
A moment that shouldn't be missed...

A girl in my dreams,
Too perfect for me to have,
A celestial being when everything dims,
Will GOD give me someone like this to love?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This poem has a brillant flow i mean it's outta this world yeah but it's so detailed like if missed read one line it messes up the whole poem yeah your were right this poem isn't like any of the others good job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    That is beautifully written.
    i love it
    keep it up, u have talent.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    BRILLANT! I absolutely adore this. The imagery in this poem was so vivid, and truly beautiful. The flow was flawless, and the emotion was intense.

    "Long or short but small nose,
    Unbelievably cute to look at,
    Pinching it will turn it as red as a rose,
    Nothing is more adorable than that..."

    ^ Aww. That was adorable. (: Amazing job. Overall:5.5

    -- Steph.

    P.S. - I hope you find the girl you're looking for. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is really sweet. Everybody's looking for the perfect girl for them, and in this poem it appears you know exactly what kind of girl would be perfect for you. The flow was smooth, the rhyming weren't forced and the choosing of words was nice. Great writing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    That was very... unique. Haha. I've never read anything like this. It's good though! I liked how it was so descriptive. You could really picture what the girl looked it! Great job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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