Congrats weekly contest winners 2/28
-
Sherry Lynn
15 years agoBizzare Memoirs by Brilliant aka Sunshine
"A very emotional piece here. The way the poem is formatted gives the lines more power. The quote connected very closely to the words almost as though it was not needed to be mentioned at the end. It truly reflects in each line. The last stanza really packs a punch for me. Nicely done."
This poem was stunning, I found it to be such an emotive piece and it really grasped my attention when reading. I think the poet took a quote and twisted it to their own advantage, personally an idea like this wouldn't of crossed my head when I read such a quote, this shows the creativity of the writer and her ability to create something out of anything. The poet incorporates her wisdom into the poem and it's inspirational for others to read. Beautiful word choice and imagery.
-----------------------
Spiritual Cleansing by Britt
This is a very powerful write that conveys positive vibes into our hearts and lives. The words of wisdom shared by this poet are indeed in depth and can certainly be a guide for all to living happily.
I could really feel the power of the truth in this write.
It has a very delicate yet powerful flow and the word choice is
strong and steady throughout.
This read like a meditation on the meaning of life, though provoking and innocent in the tone used. I can imagine people deriving comfort from her words. Well done!
---------------------------------------
A page of the rain
by: A Bowed Whisper
The title immediately caught my eye and I found myself wanting to know what lay beyond.
And I must say I was not disappointed.
Each word is very neatly placed and direct. And the entire poem flows with originality and voice.
Good luck with the next round, I hope they will do fine!
Loved the wording in this piece, the strong and deep emotions and the spiritual wisdom woven into this work of pure poetry..impressive quality!
--------------------------------------------
HM's are:
Charity
by: Melpomene
This write is very concise and powerful and created beautiful imagery without trailing on in a lovey-dovey fashion.
I love the originality that flows through this write such as :
"shriveled daisy chain
from a muddied wrist "
" peach petals rustling
at clumsy feet,"
Beautifully penned !
--------------------------
Solitary Trance by Lonely Rider
This poem was beautiful in the way it spilled emotion over the reader. I found the flow to be rocky in some places and that was because of minor errors here and there which I will point out -
Lemonade sunbeams
dance to melody
of life,
-An 'a' placed before melody would help the flow.
entwined
`this should be 'entwine'
Even though this poem had two minor errors I still voted it because I found it to be stunning, it was creative, emotive and presented beautiful imagery due to the use of color. A lovely poem.
---------------------------------------
Here
by GrammaConcept
The light heartedness and resigned tone is what makes this verse so charming, a very personal write that makes one fall in love with life.
--------------------------------------- -
Courageous Dreamer
15 years agoCongrats winners.
-
-
silvershoes
15 years agoCongratulations everybody :)
-
Michael D Nalley
15 years agoC!ontratulations esp Sunshine
-
Poet on the Piano
15 years agoCongratulations everyone and thank you judges, poets for always listening, reading, critiquing my work- I appreciate it dearly and feel others have deserved this more....
Congrats Britt and Nana :)
You rock!
