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Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

I am so bored, home alone all freaking week; so to save me from the world that is bordem please let me comment on your work. Totally free of charge. All you have to do is comment below and tell me the title or titles of work you want me to comment/rate. It doesn't even have to be your own work, just let me know who its by if the author is different from you. Thanks so much.

- Name : L
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L
14 years ago

Could you read " wrecked ship", and "white rose"?
Thank you in advance

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Sure thing! Thanks for being the first to save me from this bordem

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- Name : Tara Kay
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Tara Kay
14 years ago

Can you do "Abhorred Until Death"
"Home on the avenue"
and "twenty four" please
Thank you Mads
xxxx

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

On my way to read them at this moment. And dont thank me, you are the one saving me

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- Name : Tara Kay
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Tara Kay
14 years ago

Lol, Thank you for your comments girl.
xxxxx

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

No problem is there anyone else who would like a comment?

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- Name : Sherry Lynn
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Sherry Lynn
14 years ago

My Masters Keeper please.

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
14 years ago

Regretful repurcussions please..thank u for being bored..lol

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- Name : Lofallenve
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Lofallenve
14 years ago

"Round and Round, Descant and Masquerade" Please. :D

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- Name : SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG
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SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG
14 years ago

Deceptions if you would please, and if you feel like doing more than one, any of my more recent ones.

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Okay, all of these are done. Anyone else have anything I should read for them, cause I need something to do...

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- Name : L
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L
14 years ago

Thank you!!

If you could read my latest, " one's nightmare" and "bloody ambitions".

I would definitively appreciated.

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Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Not a problem. It has been fun reading all these different pieces so far. Does anyone else want to add to my favorites list and help cure bordem? If so then tell me a poem to comment on! XD

- Name : Lofallenve
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Lofallenve
14 years ago

Thank you so much! :D

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- Name : Amreen
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Amreen
14 years ago

My new featured poem "Loosely strapped onto your fate..."
ty..:))

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- Name : Mattias Ostling
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Mattias Ostling
14 years ago

If you don't mind, please comment on "The Jagged Street". I've just finished it, so I've yet to receive any feedback on it. Any comments would be great.

Cheers.

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

I have done all up to this point and may I say they are magnificent! Any others?

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- Name : Exostosis
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Exostosis
14 years ago

Alright, have a look at any of mine that grabs your attention =)

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- Name : Michael D Nalley
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Michael D Nalley
14 years ago

Dolorosa II

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Okay, done with both. Anyone else?

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- Name : Paul Gondwe
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Paul Gondwe
14 years ago

On heaven's door please..thanks in advance.. i will return the favor

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Don't worry about returning the favor. In fact my comment was kinda lame, sorry! And all my poetry lately is crap, so nah favor not needed.

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- Name : Jess
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Jess
14 years ago

My Latest?.

Thank You Darlin'. : )

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- Name : KDE Joyce
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KDE Joyce
14 years ago

If you're still bored, any of mine you are welcome to comment on, they're mostly about relationships and love and shit, but any critique is welcome. :D

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Done =D

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- Name : H. Elizabeth
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H. Elizabeth
14 years ago

If you would please read "Right Kind Of Love"
Please and thank you :D
It's the newest poem that i've posted so far. [:

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- Name : H. Elizabeth
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H. Elizabeth
14 years ago

Ohh, and if you'd read "Does It Ever Really?"
I just posted that one today.

Please and thank you, :D
~Hannah

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Finished with Hannah too, anyone else?

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
14 years ago

"Composing To The Deep"
or "Withdrawn" please and thank you :)

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- Name : BlueEyedMystery
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BlueEyedMystery
14 years ago

To be an Everything.. [I wish]

Thank you! :]

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- Name : Someonethere
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Someonethere
14 years ago

Can you do knock knock...?
thank you!

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- Name : L
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L
14 years ago

Could you take a look at "clock of life" and "tiny little girl with golden hair"?

Thank you.

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Okay, give me a day or two, and I will get these. In fact I cant wait. I'll start now.

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Ok done with all so far. Any others?

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- Name : Whatever works
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Whatever works
14 years ago

Me please?

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- Name : Italian Stallion
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Italian Stallion
14 years ago

Can you please do,

Beauty Within
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1182689

Thank you in advance,
Joe

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Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

Fantastic job, and done! Thank you guys for making yourselves known to me, cause now I have some new favorites. Is there anyone else out there who wants me to comment on their work?

- Name : Sherry Lynn
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Sherry Lynn
14 years ago

Thy Heart... if you would please.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1183342

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- Name : BlueJay
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BlueJay
14 years ago

No problem and my gosh you are good.

Anybody else? I am back to being bored.

Free comments for anyone. Free comments for all :P

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