FREE RATES AND COMMENTS #6!!!

  • None
    20 years ago

    any of mine.....preferably any with zero comments...it would be much appreciated,and PLEASE.....critique properly.

    thank you.

  • Red Tears Of The Soul
    20 years ago

    any of mine would be great. Thanks

  • cowgirlstar26
    20 years ago

    a single black rose
    unbound
    my demons
    vodka and duckies
    or any of em really

    let me know who's of yuors I can r.c on cuz i have nothing to do tonight

    thanks!

    Natalie

  • CinnamonTwirl
    20 years ago

    yea...so im unslacking now and ima read some...ps im KATRINA

    (and i dont kno why i insist on caps-ing my name...its probably cause im so cool)

  • Just Lucy
    20 years ago

    yeah me lol, can you please read my latest 4

    'time...it is an evil thing'
    'good morning mirror'
    'WRONG WRONG WRONG'
    'A friend no one can beat'

  • Just Lucy
    20 years ago

    and i will return the favour because i am looking for some nice poems to read aswel lol

  • ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи
    20 years ago

    wow good deal lol. I do always try and return the favor though.

    Sharp objects will not win
    3 words too late
    Story of a little girl

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    Well, I'd still love if my latest poems could be read and commented on=)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Im starting with steve and il make my way down :D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    me 2 lol

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    I didn't do all yours broken..Il get back to it :D

    Anyone heard from James latly?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    James? anyone? im gonna check when he was last on..

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Ah ha yesterday, doubt I was on :(
    Anyways..
    poetry anyone?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    Bye trick

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    MY KATIENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    lol hi :D

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    talk to me in frinedship :D

  • candi
    20 years ago

    you can read and rate mine if you would like

    The hardest thing for a father
    You never really realize
    my promise to you
    Her time

    thanxs
    candi

  • ~Black*Rose~
    20 years ago

    Hi im sorta new and i was wondering if you could would you please rate my poem I only have one up so it should be easy thank you soooo much

  • ~Black*Rose~
    20 years ago

    well just in case the name is Our Love

  • CinnamonTwirl
    20 years ago

    hey yall...KATRINA (again w.the caps) is back and im readin some...i havnt decided how ima tackle this pile but as of now i just started randomly pickin. we'll see how this works out

  • No Motiv?
    20 years ago

    Girls, Sex, "Growing Up"...

    That's one poem I would appreciate if you read. Thanks.

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    done x)

  • ASPHYXIATED
    20 years ago

    sorry, il do some now :)

  • undying blusher
    20 years ago

    if anyone could comment on some of mine...it would be much appreciated...your choice, there are over 60...a bunch of new ones with no comments too... thanks :)

  • BleedingAngel
    20 years ago

    Ok I answered #5, but it was only two of you who commented on my poems =0(.....

  • Italian Stallion
    20 years ago

    Something About You
    Idolized
    I Love You/You Love Me
    So Young And Cute
    What The Heart Wants
    Nobody Know's
    Sometimes
    I Love You

    Thanx ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    My two newest ones please..

    thank you..

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    i'm online now. dang this computer is slow!!!

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    hey James. I'm gettin on the sti\orys now, but i can't read too many. time complexity.

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    Hey, i'm wearing a sweater with saggy cuffs and it's heavy, i can't keep control over everything.
    lol

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    what can i say? meow.

  • Broken Tears
    20 years ago

    could you read *My Friend*

    thank you tons

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    on it!

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    all done

  • Feline Fatigue
    20 years ago

    g2g for now. as tiger would say, TTFN; ta ta for now!

  • sadgirl
    20 years ago

    could you plsz r/c

    the girl in the mirror and the last time

    *-LaSadGirl-*

  • themeuneverseen
    20 years ago

    umm please on these....

    Now That Your Gone
    Because of You
    Inner Beauty
    Forever

    please and thank you!
    ~*hAiLy*~

  • Naima
    20 years ago

    yes please read my poems, none in particular!!! thanx

  • Poetic Tragedy08
    20 years ago

    Hey! if you could do "an answered plea" thanks!!

  • Tainted Butterfly
    20 years ago

    If you knew
    Soulmates Never Die
    Remember Love
    Goodbye for Now, but not forever

    TY!