Anything to read?

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Anyone have any non cliche poems for me to read and comment on?

    Leave titles here please.

    Updated: Aghhh where do I start? I've had so many replies. Please bear with me.

  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    'non cliche'? dunno what that is but you can give a go at my:
    Trapped In Time
    or
    Death n Death (Part Two)

    Thanks Babe!

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Cliche is overused ideas. For example "you're an angel sent to me from heaven above" or "I grab the blade and slice my wrist..." you get the picture.

    I just would like to read original ideas, something new instead of the same old teenage stuff. However, I do realise this site is powered by teens (I'm one myself).

  • donna
    19 years ago

    Barnyard Chaos
    Isms

    Thanks :]

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Brittney -- I've already read 'Trapped In Time.'
    So I've commented on Death.

    MY1&only -- I've commented on 'Summers Breeze'

  • Michael D Nalley
    19 years ago

    I am not a teenager but I would like for you to comment on a poem that took third place on another site. I feel that the youth is the future of our world, as we know it.
    Please comment on ‘Toxic Environment’, look for a duel meaning
    Thank you in advance

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    I've commented on your poems donna!

  • N J Thornton
    19 years ago

    Michael D Nalley -- I've commented on your poem!!

  • Goth
    19 years ago

    I write alot of rhymes but recently wrote 1 that keeps gettin down voted, need some feed back for "forever & Always" , i will return the fav. Thanks!

  • LockedInEternity
    19 years ago

    hmmm...non-cliche...well you can read "Remember" or "Quiet Ocean"...i dont think they're cliche...Thankyou:):)

  • Idiosyncratic
    19 years ago

    Prelude to Extinction or Happens...

    I definitely have never read anything like them.

  • Normal is the Watchword
    19 years ago

    A butterfly effect

    Well I think it's an original poem subject : )

  • twisted reality
    19 years ago

    Hmmm...I think I have a few ideas, but you don't need to read them all. =D

    `The Song
    `Rejection
    `Empty
    `Just Me

    No need to read them all, but you can if you want lol. Thanks! =) xoxo

    Samantha

  • ---AL---
    19 years ago

    I have alot of non-cliche poems as I myself get tired of those topics..even though I do have some cliche ones too. If you want to check out two of my recent non-cliche ones check out "human Nature" and "fallen Kingdom"

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Would love your comment on my new poem... "Desires". Please and thank you!

    J. Lau

  • ether
    19 years ago

    Both of mine are non-cleche poems... At least I think...

    jess ~

  • Robie Lincer
    19 years ago

    well you could check out :

    Your eyes...
    Baby call me anything you want...

    hope you like them :D

  • BleedingAngel
    19 years ago

    Please comment on:

    Dear Jenie
    Bleeding Heart

    Thank you so much in advance =0)

  • Angie
    19 years ago

    If you can, can you take a look at my new poem:

    Sit With Me Under The Stars

    It's my first attempt at writing a non-rhyming poem. Thanx a million in advance! =D

    --Angie xoxo

  • dollwithafrown
    19 years ago

    I would love it if you could comment "Does This Darkness Have A Name?"

    Thanks in advance.

  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Breathe No more

    Poetry Revolution

    THanks!!