want me to comment on your poems?

  • Rocky
    19 years ago

    just leave the title of a poem or 2 and i'll comment on them. you dont have to return the favour but it would be appreciated

    Rocky

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  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    Can you please do,

    Footprints (love)
    Chaotic Mind (dark)

    Lol, two very opposite poems..

    Thanks a lot Babe

    :)

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  • LadyWaszky
    19 years ago

    Could you please do Backdrop and Falling Star Quarterback?

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  • Rocky
    19 years ago

    done

    done

    done
    and i will do yours now ray. ps the posts may have been by perderabu. i changed my name for a few minutes

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  • LadyWaszky
    19 years ago

    thanks. yea it was. i was like huh? lol .

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  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Please comment "Secrets" and "Nature's Paintings".

    Please and thank you.

    J. Lau

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  • lala
    19 years ago

    you can comment on any poem you want, and I'll return the favor

    thank you! :]

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  • Sandra D
    19 years ago

    can u plz do
    You did this now!? and
    Why me?

    thanx!!!

    *Shawte*

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  • ~Patiently Waiting~
    19 years ago

    Mother and Daughter if possible, thanks.

    pbw

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  • Taylor
    19 years ago

    awesome..

    How about "post-it note?"

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  • Bridget
    19 years ago

    hey any poems of mine would be great, but maybe check out "There Must be some place better" "When the Light comes alive" and/or "Can't Get Enough of You" . I will happily return the favour!!

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  • Brian Hwang
    19 years ago

    My poems are:

    "String"
    "The Only Moment We Were Alone"

    Thanks, let's take a look at yours now, shall we...

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  • Amanda
    19 years ago

    Any would be good if you have time. Not fussy which ones and i'll return the favour no problem :)

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  • Michelle18
    19 years ago

    hey could you please comment these 2:

    *drowned in tears
    *my feelings never show

    thanx

    i will comment some of yours 2.

    ~michelle~

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  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    19 years ago

    - I Don't Love You Anymore- Rewrite

    &&

    - Runaway Moon

    Thanks so much!

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  • Brittney Follett
    19 years ago

    Thanks Babe.. And the part "honey baby you're my stud." I also think its the weakest.. but i also thought it was kinda cute.. some ppl said it was like their fav part to i leave it. i agree with u its kinda weak.. but thanks babe for the comments ;)

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  • Rocky
    19 years ago

    no more requests untill i've done these ,please.

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  • Bridget
    19 years ago

    thanks 4 ur comments.. r there any poems of yours u want my opinion on? il happily vote and comment them

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  • Rocky
    19 years ago

    thanx Bridget if you'd read in the end and a distant goddess i'd appreciate it
    maybe the chant of death aswell but it is depressing

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  • Rocky
    19 years ago

    ok finished those any one else?

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  • Tainted Beauty
    19 years ago

    Cheap Beauty
    How it died

    I'll do a few of yours:)

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  • Cherise
    19 years ago

    A model story
    A 60s Go-Go

    Thanks :)

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  • BrokenREALiTy
    19 years ago

    `Loving You .

    Thanks[:

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  • Rona
    19 years ago

    Could you please r/r/c
    "Shades of Grey"
    and
    "The Performance"
    Please and thank you =)

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  • Michael D Nalley
    19 years ago

    absract reasoning

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  • Rachel RTVW
    19 years ago

    "Picture in a Frame"

    "Witness to all Seasons"

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  • Rocky
    19 years ago

    ok no more untill i've finished these again

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  • lost in lovee
    19 years ago

    could u do
    twinkle in your eye
    you'll never love me

    thanks

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  • melly xx
    19 years ago

    can you do Until Tomorrow
    thanks babe

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