Another Lottery Ticket

by Twisted Heart

Another Lottery ticket

Paycheck cashed and I'm heading home
When I pull into the parking lot
I had to stop and buy some things
From the store that I forgot.

I gathered up the things I needed
And headed for the check out stand
with the things that I collected
Filling both my hands.

When I spied there on the counter
A chance to win some cash
A chance to win ten thousand bucks
Can you imagine that?

As I stood there at the counter
My mind was put aside
As I thought of all the things
With that money I could buy.

Wow, I could get so many things
In excitement I was caught
Moments later, I left the store
Broke but for the tickets that I bought.

I scratched off all the cards I had
No winner did I see
Now I am trying to pay my bills
'Cause I disconnected from reality.

 

Submission date : 2006-11-14

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CharismaticCountryGirl ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-14

Kinda sketchy on the rhyming, but I love the overall thought. Such a waste of money on such a little chance.
Charisma*

N M Lambert ( F C ) at 2006-11-20

This is hilarious i loved it!!! very true to life too. well done x

DarkJem ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-20

Great poem :) keep it up

Luanne ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-21

Jeannie,
Girl you penned an awesome poem here. You've added a little giggle to my day.

disconnected from reality.
^^^
Love this ending line.
Been there, did that .....and bought the ticket ...lol

A great read Jeannie !


Kirsty palmer ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-21

Lol.. i liked this poem, a fun senc of humor to play with. I loved the fact it was over a lottery ticket... cause its different and unique. i felt that your others were written a bit better, as i felt that some words were kind of forced.. but stilla great write.. well done keep it up.
I Hope To get some advise from u on my poems. take care and keep writing
Love Kirsty xx



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