Submission date : 2006-11-14
CharismaticCountryGirl ( F P C D )
Kinda sketchy on the rhyming, but I love the overall thought. Such a waste of money on such a little chance.
N M Lambert ( F C )
This is hilarious i loved it!!! very true to life too. well done x
DarkJem ( F P C D )
Great poem :) keep it up
Luanne ( F P C D )
Girl you penned an awesome poem here. You've added a little giggle to my day.
disconnected from reality.
Love this ending line.
Been there, did that .....and bought the ticket ...lol
A great read Jeannie !
Kirsty palmer ( F P C D )
Lol.. i liked this poem, a fun senc of humor to play with. I loved the fact it was over a lottery ticket... cause its different and unique. i felt that your others were written a bit better, as i felt that some words were kind of forced.. but stilla great write.. well done keep it up.
I Hope To get some advise from u on my poems. take care and keep writing
Love Kirsty xx