Rejection

by Twisted reality

She's unnoticed in a corner so dark,
All because of those evil remarks.
Tears roll down her face inside,
And that is how she divides.

She lets no one discover,
What really is under,
Those miles and miles,
Of fake little smiles.

She's tired of being rejected,
And always being effected.
Words so harsh by everyone else,
That really weren't all that false.

She finally gave in,
And had already died within.
Because those words were for fun,
Those people finally won.

**Ok, maybe some of you think this should be in the sad poems, but I put it in here. I will always return votes/comments.**

 

Submission date : 2006-10-15
Last edit : 2006-10-21

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kelS; at 2006-11-23

I hope you don`t mind.. but i am going to put this poem on my nexopia.

just comment me on the poem "uhm" if you don`t want me to.

Rachel Barnett ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-13

This is sad but I can see why you put it under the Life category. I am sure many people can relate to this especially teenagers. It is so hard to be young and teenagers can be so cruel. Thanks for sharing this.Nice job.

PrettyInPunk[LauRa] ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-19

I liked its flow and wording and i don't think it should be in sad poems,it fits here
Especially i liked those

She lets no one discover,
What really is under,
Those miles and miles,
Of fake little smiles.

Good job

Ps.You're added to my favorites,i liked your style and have been looking for good friends and thought maybe you can be,would you like to be a friend of mine?
E-mail me to let me know
Have a nice day
Your-friend-to-be
Laura

BeautifullyxBroken ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-31

Awhh this is real sad:[
but very good writing.
keep up the good work.

shantavia ( F P C ) at 2009-05-18

Omg like this is my favorite



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