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by Natalie Apr 1, 2008
Sadness, depression /
I cannot find the words.
Afraid? Alone? Numb?
Does anybody understand?
Old story book teller; lied.
Happily ever after was never real.
Just a false thought inside my mind.
How do I go on without him?
Breathe? Walk? feel?
He doesn't even care anymore.
But maybe I was simply wrong.
You are an amazing writer :) It's to straight to the point, and I just can't faulter it! It's quite sad though, but the way you have written it, it portrays anger as well. But yet, it's beautiful :)
by Jenna Rose Kat
Very vivid, and thugh it has a more depressing subject youmade it seem a but more lighthearted, at least to me anyway.
5/5 :) Keep up the amazing work!
Yes yes yes very nice poem,and unfortunately i can relate it to myself :( but i loved this poem
by OooOaMbeR JustInEOooO
Wow. i loved the way this poem flowed, it makes the emotions seemed more mixed. gives the poem more of a confused feeling.. great great job!!
Also, Very good.
I really enjoy the flow of this poem, it is very clear where pauses should be.