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by AnnMarie Jun 6, 2004
Life, society /
You are no longer looking at the world through rose-colored glasses,
And it seems as if the world keeps throwing you curves and passes.
You think that God has left you; you and you only,
But you can't see that you are not lonely.
You thought that your life went on forever, free as the sun
Soon you found that the life you had was only one.
You forgot that God forgives you for all of your sins,
Just as he's forgiven all other men.
You thought that no one was trying to help you out, give you a hand,
You were right there was not just one hand rather a whole band.
Why? You never tried to turn your life around no one has a clue,
You left them as everything else out into the blue.
Just wish you would look at my world, through my colored glasses,
Maybe then you would see that it's only you that keeps throwing the curves and passes
I bet ur dad was proud of u .. :)
Loved the sweet sentiments in the poem all the thoughts were lovely, flow a bit fragmented but i loved the poem anyway xxALLYxx
by UnToLd TrUtH
This was interesting....i really didn't get it to tell you the truth tell the end.
I liked very much how you changed the first stanza a bit to make the last one. that gave the poem a stronger flow. Good poem!! I enjoyed reading this one as much as all your other ones. Don't lose your talent:)
Very nice.. it was metaphorical and really made you think.. it flowed pretty well and the descriptions were good.. 5/5