Lost within the murders.

This was basically a masterpice to be quite honest with you. The flow was flawless, and I'm very glad that you put puncuation in this write because without puncuation, you dont get that nice smooth flow. Well done! You know what to do, keep writing. :]

5/5.

The flow was great; no issues at all. The wording was superior as well; I enjoyed the old fashioned wording. There really wasnt anything to change. The subject was well preserved without overkilling it; the vocabulary was great.

5/5

This was brilliant and carries many truths throughout. Each stanza was written quite well, with great vocabulary and a flawless flow. It was a great read/write. I really enjoyed the story it told. You're a very talented poet.

5/5

The pain we've watched in silence
this sentence definetly touched me beyond words it alludes to so many things in my life

overall the poem was simply beautifully written the only thing i didnt get was the last stanza it was a tad confusing for me ...but anyways i loved..awesome

xHSx

The wording, flow, format, and emotion was great and strong through out the poem. I really liked this poem because it speaks the truth. I gave it a 5/5 because I liked it and I saw nothing wrong with it. It was an easy read and easy to understand. Keep up the great work.