You create some of the best imagery, and motion in this piece. I really enjoyed reading this, with all the creativity and all. You created a wonderful tone and stuck with it, which it seems most people fail to do. Though it is short, thanks to word count and the flow, it defiantly stands out to me and it was still amazing. This piece is one of the best I have found on this site. 5/5 and if it is not worth that, then please tell me, what is?