Heart beats on

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Nov 4, 2010


Mountains rose high in a sky turning
purple with splashes of lilac and gold
creating a back drop for the emerald
arms of the welcoming forest trees.

A rising moon spread a satiny carpet
of silver across a dark silent lake .
An owl sounded eerily in the evening breeze
accompanied by a loon calling sadly.

Rustling of leaves caused reason for
caution and yet I walked fearless upon
a path leading to my hearts desire.
Love guided me through the unseen.

In the clearing a cabin of logs loomed
ahead, smoke billowing from the chimney
lights dimmed romantically, the fragrance
of fresh chopped wood filled my senses.

Heart pounding I approached the door,
hand shaking I hesitated for just a
moment .Knocking was greeted with a
smile and open arms. wrapping me in a
warm embrace.

Death took her long ago, yet her spirit
waits for me each anniversary day. I meet her
in our special place where love lives on
even death is unable to stop our forever

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  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Fabulous piece. The word choice is stunning and it Is just so.wonderfully written. Your voice is clear and strong which makes this piece even better. I love this piece and think you have penned something amazing.

  • Okay... I'm almost crying... Wow.. -=fans self=-
    That was very amazing and heartfelt. Definitely got a lot of emotion and took a lot of emotion from me..

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A write that has a mix of emotions as well as
    situations with a moving end to remember..like watching a movie..beautifully penned!

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Tj..I have found something very special in your poetry.
    >your style is not boring..lol

    I just low how everything flows so well together.

    I love the words you choose and CHOSe in this poem, the usage of them. the expressions you create and the images u draw..

    It;s just perfect.
    The very 1st stanza was REALLY catchy and then 3rd stanza was one of my favs..I loved the whole piece tho..to a certain extent that I read it another time, for the love of revealing more messages, out of this poem

    claps*
    5//5 I have to agree with what Sylvia..said..amazing mixture .

  • 7 years ago

    by Raquel

    This poem was awesome i almost cried!!!!!!!! write more so everyone can see ur talent:)