Fabulous piece. The word choice is stunning and it Is just so.wonderfully written. Your voice is clear and strong which makes this piece even better. I love this piece and think you have penned something amazing.
Tj..I have found something very special in your poetry.
>your style is not boring..lol
I just low how everything flows so well together.
I love the words you choose and CHOSe in this poem, the usage of them. the expressions you create and the images u draw..
It;s just perfect.
The very 1st stanza was REALLY catchy and then 3rd stanza was one of my favs..I loved the whole piece tho..to a certain extent that I read it another time, for the love of revealing more messages, out of this poem
5//5 I have to agree with what Sylvia..said..amazing mixture .