Embracing life

by Flynel   Apr 13, 2011


We all have our ups and downs
but even if its more sadness than happiness
its how you deal with it
cause when people starts talking
thinking they know everything
while you know its not true
and you cant make up their minds
it wont matter
cause its all about how you stand in life

Hm, It may hurt a bit
but how more you fight for a true life
how stronger you will be
even when your on your own
or with your friends

Well maybe some friends will let you down
but someday you will know who is worth to trust
and people who just tries to fit in
by believing every word they hear
without listening to the story from the person itself
isnt even worth to be sad about

These words may sound familiar
I just hope you all know what Im trying to say
cause you have to know
ive had a lot of sadness in life
though I wont ever stop embracing life.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Flynel

    Yeah okay but its not only about how good you are in english, But what you trying to say to the world.

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    It's = contraction for it is
    its = possessive pronoun

    The only problem with the mistakes is having people take it seriously. Whether that is important or not to you is not for me to say.

    My personal belief is that with your talent, you should want them to take it seriously.

  • 13 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    It's = contraction for it is
    its = possessive pronoun

    The only problem with the mistakes is having people take it seriously. Whether that is important or not to you is not for me to say.

    My personal belief is that with your talent, you should want them to take it seriously.

  • 13 years ago

    by Flynel

    When I have time I will change the mistakes, Thanks for your comment (:

  • 13 years ago

    by Flynel

    Is it so bad, those mistakes? besides, its and it's is the same..

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