The Ride( Senryu)

Short and sweet!! I love this poem. I've read it like 10 times and it means 10 diferent things.

This is really excellent, the wording is just right for a short, Japanese format like this!

well done, girl:)

5/5 Ingrid

Exquisitely Penned, Bravo!!!

I loved how you said, "on a horse of trust". Although the relationship with the one you trust can run smoothly, it can also get quite a bit bumpy, and become questioned. Overall beautiful work, beautiful message.
Take care

Amazin xxx