My Man (Acrostic/Tongue Twister)

by Maple Tree   Feb 5, 2012

Jewelry jumps in his jacket of joy
jolly jokes jive from the jaws of a boy.

Authentic ankles ache to be adorned
analyzing an angels attitude is scorned.

Macaroni magically mesmerizes me
mixed and matched with marmalade tea.

Excitement explodes with endless esprit
enchantment erupts in sweet ecstasy.

Selfishly singing slowly with sanity
sacrificing silly songs for my vanity.

Dedicated to my Husband James~
he challenged me to write an acrostic poem
that is a tongue twister and that rhymes...
here you go love, enjoy :-)


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  • 6 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I dont know if its me or the wine, your write or all three but i couldnt say it out loud lol!!

    Such a cool write though syrup, as punishment james should read it aloud after a beer :-)

    Big loves x

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Hahahaha james u should never challenge my baby.....

  • 6 years ago

    by Scrittore

    Wow! This is amazing!! I can't even begin to imagine how long it took to not only have the tounge twisting make sense -- but to rhyme! Also, a great way to develop writing ability!!


  • 6 years ago

    by My Other Side

    Bravo!! Well done. This was jovial and full of energy. I liked this alot. Very inventive and original.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Ohh i loved this one...
    you are really very witty :D just loved the flow... The acrostic is amazing and your tongue twisters makes it even more interesting. Your husband would have loved it :D

    Enjoyed reading :D