Drawing on the pumpkin

by Khalid   Jul 23, 2012


In our party
you have to petrify all pirates
and fire all the poltergeists
It's not phantasm and not a prank
because we don't trust in phantoms.
I'll bring my potion
where both the prince and princess
will pretend that they'll be carving
and drawing on the pumpkin.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like how this poem has an ironic twisted reality to it. I can see how things relate to each other in the mind of a child and innocence is the school of thought that imagination belongs too... Sometimes reality is more beautiful that way.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Like Dagmar said, this reminds me of Halloween. Kids dressed up as pirates and ghosts, and prince/princesses... all carving pumpkins at their party. I loved how you used all the "P" words from the contest.

    Great write.

    • 5 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you hun! This means a lot to me.

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This poem reminds me of Halloween
    children all dressed up, having fun
    carving the pumpkins. beautiful write
    Khalid

    • 5 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you lol!

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great write, Khalid! :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thanks lol!

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Khalid! I didn't know this was your write in the contest...sooooo creative you used all the p words in one poem!! Loved it!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thanks a lot lol!