The Toothache

I'm so excited to read this!c: I wrote a short, flash fiction story over this concept. This is beautiful. I really understand how this feels, and I'm so glad. I've got a lotta respect for you, after reading this. C:

Still waiting for the headache challenge poem! yap 2nd is week over Mr!

This is great Larry, I know exactly how you feel and I have also considered pliers and the like.

The best thing about this is when you read it my mouth actually started to throb!!!

There is real pain in this.

I was trying to avoid this poem but..being the curious person that I am I just had to visit! My prime fear (apart from snakes as you know) is the dentist! I never used to be like this but now...I went recently..not that I was in pain but one of my caps broke..right at the front of my mouth so..off I went and...$7,000 later I have my nice smile back...to match the broken tooth up with the other caps which were stained with too much coffee and Cigs would have cost $2,200 so I decided to get them all replaced....just could imagine myself taking teeth out to put on the night stand!

But...nightmares?....I walked round the bloke a few times each visit before I could open the door!

Your imagery is spot on! My gums were throbbing just reading it. 5/5