May you have good end [Tanka]

by Khalid M Darwish   Jan 27, 2013


You will never know
who'll awake you when you sleep
just your family
or angels who will ask you
May Allah make it good end

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Has a nice message

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I think this piece needs a bit more work to make the idea clearer..

    but this is what I thought.. I thought you aimed to say that we might be alive and our family could be that who wake us up or we may have died and the angels are waking us...

    I am not too sure.