Wow - absolutely, genuinely brilliant writing. This really does ooze class. As sad as it is, it can't help but be beautiful. Too many great lines to choose but "I know my eyes will painfully open to see the black sun rising" really is superb. To never see happiness in things again - not even the sun, which is now black to you. One of the best poems I've read on this site.
An Irreplaceable write, beautiful in darkness and wrought with the purest despair. I like the centralized idea the ends up uniting the poem "the black sun" incorporating this validates the rest of the write into one beautiful package.
4 years ago
by Midnight Sky
Long but you told a good story that is the important thing