Confusion

by crystaljean88   Aug 19, 2013


Not taking this crap,
I dont need this.
Not worth another hug,
Or a lasting kiss.
Done everything you wanted,
Was always around.
Im your last option,
A stray that you found.
Loving you hurts,
Not worth this pain.
Wanting your heart,
Not the petty games.

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  • 4 years ago

    by The Fairy Mary Poppins

    I liked it it's true love is suckish but people choose to be "in love" people say otherwise but love IS a choice and I like that in this poem you're done with that person's "poop" 5/5

    -Bet

  • 4 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Would of liked for it to rhyme. but I still like it. I like the depth of the poem . the pain reflects well.

  • 4 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Love can be very confusing at times so that makes me like this title. It seems like this person is finally standing up for themseleves. So that tells me they have been hurt through out this relationship. I think that anything that causes you pain is not worth your time at all. There also seems to be conflicting emotions within this person as well. It seems like they are hurt and wanting to leave but love is strong and hard to get away from. I think it's harder to move on especially when you have been together a long time.b

    Im should be I'm.

    I really liked the flow of this poem. It really keeps the poet interested. The rhyming for me works well and goes with the flow of the message of the poem. The lines are short enough and make the story better. Anyways. I'm not a huge fan of love poems but this is very well written. 5/5

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