by Larry Chamberlin Mar 16, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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You dance, leading me rhythmically, |
by Maple Tree
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Judging Comment |
by Meena Krish
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Now that you mentioned that its a shape poem have been sitting back and trying to figure this shape out....kinda looks like an hour glass or a rocket or maybe I'm wrong. |
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My intent was to depict Tightening and Stretching as in a dance where the partners rhythmically approach and pull away. |
by Liz
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Absolutely beautiful. |
by Meena Krish
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A lifeless star has been given a feeling which still lives on and remembered...I feel that sadness penned between the lines...touching. |
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Thank you, Min. |