Comments : The Eve of My Dreams

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem is on pg 159 in my book the Balance of the heart Soul & Mind visit my website at www,

  • 13 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Truly Inspiring!

  • 13 years ago

    by jamie25

    very nice! im impressed! i like your writing style .

  • 13 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem, nice flow!! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    very good poem u have got the talent^**^ keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by Shy

    5/5 i love the way it flows

  • 13 years ago

    by PuRpLeHaYz

    excellent poem
    5/5 i liked it u hav so much talent
    can u plz vote and comment on my poem y do boys lie
    peace out
    xx hayz xx

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Excellent....i can tell you must be very into religion ha(duh)i love your style 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Now then mr great poet! This is fantastic! You are going on my favourites because i wanna read more! Thanks for all the comments because i really appreciate it! I truly do.

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Loved it again. It flowed well, And you did great on making sure the rhyming didn't seem forced. A very nice poem. and thanks for your comments =) 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by Aline

    U know? i dont usually vote 5/5 for every poem i like, i should LOVE the poem, and i loved this poem a lot, actually or ur poems are great. so 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A glorious write Michael, excellent penn!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    This poem is very touching!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really don't know what to say,

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a excellent write. You are truely talented. I really enjoyed reading this. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Wow that so great keep it up love linda ~~***~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Your first stanza?
    Is it okay for me to fall in love
    With your poetry...
    Eck, never mind. Already did.
    This is... uh-maze-zing.
    I was going to go three stanza
    Over stanza on what I didn't like
    But honestly, dearest?
    I didn't find a single thing...
    I wish I did, so I could just say
    Hah hah, if he could become a poet
    So could I.
    But you've raised the level so high.
    It's just... wonderful.
    Darling, this poem inspired me.
    I'll make sure that all my poems
    Would be half as good as this.
    Hopefully more.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This was simply amazing. It was long but its worth my time! I really enjoyed reading this one. I love the rhyming in the poem! excellent choice of words! Fantastic work! 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Another well penned poem. Great word usage and flow. 5/5


  • 9 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    The format wasn't my favorite but everything else about the poem was great. I gave this poem a 5/5. Saw nothing wrong with anything in this poem.