Broken and confused

by vincent   Oct 2, 2016


A shadow forms in my mind,
dark and mysterious it lurks from behind.
My heart beats faster as it slowly eats me.
This is real, how bad can it be?
I tried to hide it with a smile,
but it only lasts for awhile.
Drown it with a drink they say,
but wine didn't make it go away.
The angst and pain worsen day by day.
So hard to get over it, can't even understand why.
Where did I go wrong?
I thought I was strong.
Yet there you are, you've been gone
so long..

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  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    Me likes the rhymes and the poem overall.

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent write. One i can realate too.. well done :) if you want someone to talk too..

    I know how nothing helps.. no amount of booze no amount of smiling or anything

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Vincent, hi, so nice to see a write from you. I really liked this a lot. It's sad but written beautifully. Depression is a rough road to travel but you are working through it. Well done-Brenda

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    A fantastic write.
    I don't ever think depression will be gone completely but that we learn to live with it and deal with it better and head on.

    All the best, Em

    • 1 year ago

      by vincent

      Glad you like em, few errors but its a start.. Yeah best way to live with depression is to acknowledge it and ofcourse acceptance, that things will never go back the way we like them to.

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