Quite a powerful poem in view of the terrorist attack in London. Sometimes repetition can make or break a poem, I feel in this instant it has added immensely to flow and as somebody has already expressed the sentiment you are conveying. So sad that humanity has nowhere to hide from attacks such as this. Great title, I like the subtle changes to the last stanza which almost mirrors the first stanza, adding depth. Well written and thought provoking.
1 year ago
This is very, very raw but so fitting and made me cry. Powerful stuff x