winding road

by Fredy Sanchez   Sep 5, 2017

While walking alone in battered robes
I stumbled upon a lost broken road...
Where the dust had settled and the light was gone...
Where once with fate i meddled and the future was stone....
Such promise this road once held...
Only longing and sorrow now I felt...
The birds of prey all perched on the dead trees...
Impervious to the bite of the cold breeze...
The road was littered with corpses of ill advised decisions,
Lost long ago was my soul in this war of attrition....
I know now The winding road had robbed me of my will
Fresh on my memory the wounds bled still...
And yet... i kept on walking through
Dragging my feet as there was nothing else I could do...


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  • 1 year ago

    by Lvi

    the road was littered with corpses of ill advised decisions

    ^^this created strong visuals.

    Amazing write !

    Take care-

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is so wonderfully put, Fredy. Flawless rhyming and really good flow. Ah, that road... We can do nothing but walk in it! Great work!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Fredy - all we can do is keep walking on, good man. Really well written and rhymed.

    Take care and all the best,

  • 1 year ago

    by Mandy Earl

    Very visual, Fredy! I know that bone weariness all too well, my best to you!


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