Alternative thoughts

by mysticalpisces   Nov 16, 2017

Imagine being in alternate reality
Where everything is distorted
To the close minded, a catastrophe
But to the open minded, beauty
Fifth dimensional entities
Manifested for eternities.
Is everything we see real?
Or has the truth been concealed..


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  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I've only just seen this.

    This is so so my kinda thing. Had I seen it sooner and had my head not been somewhere else I would have nominated it.

    Sorry for my delay.

    Often! I think the fantasy stuff is ignored in the wake of real life, some of us seek a little fantasy to escape it at times.

    I think it unjust, as this piece although short is simply fantastic.

    Fave! Without a doubt.



  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is great! My son's studying philosophy at the mo and this reminds me of Plato's 'rationalism', where he claims we ought not to trust our senses or what we see at all, as nothing collected from the senses is real ... as though being in an alternate reality.
    A really good 'thinky' piece! :-)

    • 1 year ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you! Wow that's amazing I would love to study philosophy. I hope he's enjoying it. Really appreciate your comment. :) x

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    and there's my beautiful daughter :)
    with a wonderful piece of writing, that I know comes from your deep thoughts.
    Well done lovely and love you lots forever
    Dad xxxxx :)

    • 1 year ago

      by mysticalpisces

      You know me well dad!! Thankyou I love you forever too xxxxxxxx

  • 1 year ago

    by Mark

    Very well written and thought provoking. I imagine such an alternative reality

    • 1 year ago

      by mysticalpisces

      It's quite exciting really. My head is always stuck in the clouds lol. Thank you Mark x

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