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by CJ Maleney Nov 20, 2017
Love, romance /
i love you
!While you sleep!
Do you think that I don't watch you?
Do you realise I see everything?
Every twitch, every R.E.M.
The things of dreams!
All I've won and all I've lost
All that what once was and what could be?
Do you know?
I see it as you slumber!
In your semi sleep state!
My heartbeat slows and my breathing,
In sync with yours.
Sometimes your head upon me, my chest will rise and fall with your rhythm.
My breath shall not wake you.
I will be part of you.
Do you know?
I still rub your feet while you sleep?
You hate it when awakened,
But in sleep it soothes you.
!You slumber on!
Do you know I watch you as you slumber?
!You must! Surely you must!
Your eyelids closed,
Hiding your beautiful eyes.
Hiding your questions and your fears,
But those same fears cause that twitch.
I may not be here when you wake!
I may be hundreds of miles from you.
But I place a kiss upon your head before I must leave.
I try not disturb your slumber.
by Dagmar Wilson
Such a beautiful piece and glad to see it was nominated. All the best
by CJ Maleney
Thank you Dagmar.
Very sweet Craig and just purely beautiful. Glad it's nominated.
Thank you Mel
by Kitty Cat Lady
The first verse was a bit 'stalker-ish' Craig, but then turned into something so sweet. I love the way it's set out too, it reads beautifully :-) x
Thank you so much, well apart from the stalker bit lol.
Fantastic Craig purely beautiful
Thank you Em, hope you are OK not been about much of late.
by Ben Pickard
Great write, Craig. Well done. Nominated.
Thank you so much Ben, I caught your comment earlier but today has been crazy busy so didn't have the time to catch up with things.
Thank you also for the nomination, Not worthy me thinks, yet it still means a lot.
As always dude
by The Po whet