kitty gets his cream (doditsu/acrostic)

by Mr. Darcy   Apr 20, 2018


lapping your lower lip brings

overwhelming joy to me

victorious - I'm a King

eating as I please

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- Mr. Darcy
© 2018.

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Doditsu:
The Doditsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and often portrays love or humor as subject matter.

It comprises 26 syllables made up of four lines of 7-7-7-5 syllables respectively. It usually does not rhyme.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Very good Mr D, lapping up the humour ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Cute write and I like the mixture of the forms too! Well
    done with this piece :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    lol ... very good and another new form, with an acrostic too! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Another humour filled piece Mr D and one which could have multiple meanings I guess... Nope just my mind in the gutter then?? Oops

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