Commitment.

by Phoenix ¥   May 11, 2018


You could give me your friendship,
You could give me your time,
You could give me your body
As I gave you mine.

You could give me your love
You could give me your care
Is that not enough?
No I can’t leave it there.

Can’t stop thinking about the choice you made.
And what that says about us.
I think it probably says it all,
It never really was.

You see to me it all makes sense,
I wouldn’t have been resistant.
But you saw things differently
You wouldn’t show me that commitment.

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  • 6 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    So very relatable. And excellently worded. Love it

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this. An emotional captivating write of unrequited love. The emotion leaps from the page and leaves no doubt as to what has unfurled. Milly x

    • 7 months ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks for your insightful comment Milly xx

  • 7 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is a really raw, emotional and good write that states or so I feel that they got what they wanted and left you stranded well more fool them is all I'll say

    • 7 months ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      ;-) thanks Em xx
      P.s - I love marmite

  • 7 months ago

    by William Mae

    A really good write, it seems rare to find two in the same place in a relationship.

    • 7 months ago

      by Phoenix ¥

      Thanks William and I agree it’s an extremely rare phenomenon and usually fleeting in my experience.

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