by Mark Sep 27, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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How joyous it would be |
by Em
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JUDGING COMMENT: |
by MoonMaiden
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This made me want to keep reading more! Forreal.. I love the metaphoric prases used in here. Brings the writing to life even more, in my opinion. Wtbs, also adding this to my favs as well. Please, don't stop writing. |
by Brise
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Love this poem is beautiful! Great Job!! |
by Em
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Absolutely beautiful Mark |
by Brenda
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Mark, this is just lovely! Nicely rhymed throughout. Well done! |