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by HOLLY ARMER Oct 7, 2004
Sadness, depression /
Sunshine wishes ... melancholy dreams
Shooting stars ... shattered moonbeams
Showering love ... thundering hate
Unanswered prayers tempting my fate.
Sapphire hope ... vacant eyes
Glimmering faith ... empty lies
Futuristic shimmer ... flickering life
Destiny cut by the blade of my knife.
Ruby flood ... shadowed face
Fading spirit ... tranquil grace
Angel lifted ... soul in flight
As I slip away into the light.
*Any vote/comments appreciated*
by Lovely Bones
This sounds like one of those poems where you wake up in the middle of the night and it's just there.. even if it's not it's still a very good poem! I've never read anything like this.. I like it a lot =)
Take Care and God Bless,
I thought that this was an interesting style to write in. Keep up the good work. You are really talented.
by brown eyes and a melancholy smile
Holly, you are so talented. your work is beauiful, i love reading your poetry. very well done on this peice, unique style, nice flow. the titles awsome by the way! keep it up
Wow, great write. Such a beautiful poem. I love it. Nice work. <3333
Kool,direct and to the point. I can see the blog is wanning lol, Keep writing