From angel to demon

by Elynnka   Feb 17, 2005

Cry for the broken wings
Of a dying angel who sings,
Cause while you're sleeping
This fading angel is weeping,
He breaks in teary eyes
Waiting for his own demise
And bleeds more every day
As he feels it slip away...
His once beautiful white clothes
Turned to black and no one knows
That he's changed because of them
All their lies were killing him...
His loving feeling turned to hate,
He can't be saved now, it's too late...
His shining aura turned to spikes
Now he's someone no one likes:
A demon born from your filthy lies,
A lost soul that screams and cries...

**Note: Won second place at a poetry contest on this website =) Hope you like it!**


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  • 12 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    WOW. i don't know what to say at the poem, just that it was awesome! 5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    great job. This poem is really powerful. <3333

  • 13 years ago

    by Victoria

    This is a very powerful poem its really well written it send vivid images across thanks for your comment and keep it up!

    take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent! You painted the picture of this fallen angel perfectly! 5!

  • 13 years ago

    by James

    WOW.....Ilinca that was sad but yet beautiful 5/5 all the way to good to be 4.6 lov ya :) take care