Tread Lightly.... (Quatern)

by HOLLY ARMER   Jun 15, 2005


Please tread lightly upon my heart
for the pieces break with such ease
Bringing painful tears to my eyes
As I fall down upon my knees

Holding the softest part of me
Please tread lightly upon my heart
For words can cut so easily
Ripping my perfect world apart

Divulging my innermost soul
All I shall ever ask of thee
Please tread lightly upon my heart
For you could be my destiny

So take my hand and all of me
We'll begin a triumphant start
Wandering through eternity
Please tread lightly upon my heart

Here are the guidlines for a Quatern:
It is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A Quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Again, I love the formed peotry as it is much more challenging than the average kind. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Again you have wowed me. I enjoy all your works. Keep inspiring us...

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Oh Wow!!! This was so truly breath taking, so beautiful, inspiring and awesome. I could read this time and time again and ejoy it more each time!
    Kudos.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    I really like this, its written so well! "for the pieces break with such ease" wonderful Holly as ever!

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Hi Ms. Holly, that is the best quatern I have ever read, in fact, its probably the first, too. Its beautiful, the words and how you express them, its truly an honor to read it. Love, Tim