Great ending! I can understand being afraid I was in a relationship for 9 years that failed and I thought love wasn't worth it. I hope one day I will find the right one! Another poem full of emotion and meaning. ~Brooke~
Thank you very much for the advice. I agree, but with this poem I went for more of a clear message. I have written poems with less clear messages, ones with metaphors/imagery, and I have been trying to do that more. It seems when I try to force it, I'm not very good at metaphors. Yes, you were clear. This poem did start off with one situation before getting to "You this and You that."
And I'm very glad you still enjoyed it. Thank you.
I agree with you also, Jamie, in that not every poem has to be about imagery...I appreciate both and everyone else's feedback. I do take in consideration what you say, and I will continue to try things differently in the future.
Wow. This was really inspirational and the way it was written just makes it flow much nicer and I just liked it a lot. Reading the poem was a lot of fun itself because it explained a lot of feelings regarding broken relationships and stuff, and I just loved it :). Really awesome job, 5/5
Exactly. This is something that I have been contemplating for a while, now that I've come out of my depression. The message in this poem is exactly what people need to know. That love and heartbreak is part of life. Good job.
great poem. love the message and feeling felt in this poem. i didnt believe in love until i found my boyfriend john and now i know love is real and it can work if you can find that one person who makes your heart skip a beat evertime you see them or think of them or talk to them on the phone. great poem and the end is very inspirational.
5/5 from me lady - the "wonderful guy" LOL! I appreciate the comment you left...just getting right back at ya, thank you precious. Oh and by the way...this poem does ring true :D Just my 2 cents - have a wonderful evening
Okay rose.. all the way @ the bottom lol..here i am!... anyways.. lol that poem was very well written andalot of the things you said wer true.. but what really did it for me was the ending. I loved it.
Bit like no matter about the negatives like the car accident positives will happen to. This is why I like the poem, and also the love with philosophy behind it I like. Keep up the good writings, I wish I could write just love. xx