Words won't do

by Bradley Peter   Sep 18, 2005

I've been sitting here all day
with this pencil in my hand
trying to think of the right words to say
to help you understand

its hard to get the words across
but I'll do my best
because without you I'm lost
my heart is hard to express

i don't think words can explain
the feelings in my heart
and i can almost go insane
when we're too far apart

so I've been sitting on this floor
waiting for the perfect words to come
so i sit here some more
like when I'm with you, my body's numb

i wish for a moment my words could
explain what you've done to me
and if these words would
then finally you could see

no words can be said
my feelings can only be shown
so from now to the day we wed
I'm yours to own

*Kirsty, there are no words in the world that can express the way i feel about you, it hurts so much you not being able to know how much i love you. Even as i think about it now I've got a lump in my throat. i love you*


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  • 11 months ago

    by Jenny Paradise

    This is beautiful. I love it!

  • 11 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Such a beautiful poem. I am sure no one in this world loves kirsty more than you.

    • 11 months ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Oh, God! That post-script...

      Well, I sure hope her husband and children do.

      Thank you very much for the kind words, sir. They are gratefully appreciated.

  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, this is so sweet, and cute!

    • 11 months ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you. Reading it, I pretty much spent my entire time cringing, but I sincerely appreciate your praise

  • 10 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Dang this was a good poem for the most part. It should great emotion i'm just not a big fan of the AbAb rhyme but you made it work. I hope you two are still together.

  • 11 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Aww that is the sweetest poem i have ever red....seriously it is great....i wish i could write up something like that...lol omg ive read most of ur poems and seriously as scary as it is....i can relate to almost every single one of them!
    your an amazing writter....i seriously think you could go somewhere with these poems! that how good i think they are.... If its okay with you... can i please use this poem and give it to someone....because like you said in the poem that you couldnt find the words to say to this person...that is exactly how i feel about someone! and id love to be able to give them this poem...thats if you'll let me....
    Keep ^ the AMAZING work!
    And ill keep reading! lol
    Love Paige
    please look and comment on my poems!

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