I've been sitting here all day
with this pencil in my hand
trying to think of the right words to say
to help you understand
its hard to get the words across
but I'll do my best
because without you I'm lost
my heart is hard to express
i don't think words can explain
the feelings in my heart
and i can almost go insane
when we're too far apart
so I've been sitting on this floor
waiting for the perfect words to come
so i sit here some more
like when I'm with you, my body's numb
i wish for a moment my words could
explain what you've done to me
and if these words would
then finally you could see
no words can be said
my feelings can only be shown
so from now to the day we wed
I'm yours to own
*Kirsty, there are no words in the world that can express the way i feel about you, it hurts so much you not being able to know how much i love you. Even as i think about it now I've got a lump in my throat. i love you*
Aww that is the sweetest poem i have ever red....seriously it is great....i wish i could write up something like that...lol omg ive read most of ur poems and seriously as scary as it is....i can relate to almost every single one of them!
your an amazing writter....i seriously think you could go somewhere with these poems! that how good i think they are.... If its okay with you... can i please use this poem and give it to someone....because like you said in the poem that you couldnt find the words to say to this person...that is exactly how i feel about someone! and id love to be able to give them this poem...thats if you'll let me....
Keep ^ the AMAZING work!
And ill keep reading! lol
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