True Love

by Ali   Oct 3, 2005

I have realized one thing lately,
been thinking about you a lot,
I'd never thought I'd feel this way,
but there's no reason why I should not,

There's something about you,
I just cannot express,
you've opened my heart to something new,
but my feelings, I repress,

I know I don't have a single chance,
to be with you,
I feel there are too much differences,
maybe its true,

I guess I just have to stay,
with seeing you from day to day,
a "hi" here and there,
maybe it's better this way,

Maybe I'll tell you one day,
how I truly feel,
because I love you so much,
I know my love for you is real.


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  • 12 years ago

    by Dreamer

    Very nice poem, man ali.. i know how you feel, to big diffrence between you and the girl and you know it wont work out, i was in ur situation, i told her i love her and she was mine but then we were forced to break up due to our big diffrences, it was heart breaking, we were still so in love.. so we stayed friends but we were still in love so we told each other we love each other until a day she said she lost the feeling, shes hiding it now..
    i still wake up at night and cant sleep..

    just think before you do anything..

  • 12 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Nice poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah White

    I know I don't have a single chance
    to be with you
    I feel there are too much differences
    maybe its true

    This stanza seems slightly out of place with the 2 shorter lines, but still, good emotional poem. Nice work x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ali

    Thanks all,
    This is special to me, I have really written it for my girl!! it relates so much to my situation!

    Thanks for you comments anyway!

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done, very nice job!!!