God this is amazing, grabbed me from the beginning to the end.....You have done it again sweety =0) Just hope that you will feel better soon, that you won't feel so alone...I am always here for you if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, just let me know...Truely a masterpiece...
I really like this, its basically how i live my life my favorite lines are these:
Because I know exactly how bad it feels
To fight through life all alone
I can relate to those two lines so well. if you need to talk i'm here to listen bcuz i kno how it feels to b alone, so i'm here for u , great poem, keep it up. never give up ! hugs-hayley
That is amazing..
i feel that way so very often- i am a teacher, i work with Sk's and Gr. 1's, and none of them know how messed up i am, but everyday, i have to put on a happy face, and be the one who's there for them, the one who helps make everything better again..
that was so easy when we were little, i wish it could still be such a simple thing..
One of the best poems that i have ever read. I know how you feel, so much that it hurts.
I dont know u but i just wish u knew u weren't alone.
take care of urslef huni,
Much love xoxoxo
Hiya darlin i love your poem it is gr8 but you shoukdn't just bury how you feel and your pain even tho its harder than what people say
But it is a beautilful poem n i fink you could be a gd poet 1 day *hugs* love ya babe xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
Wow. That sounds a lot like my life. I am the person all my friends come to for help and adivice, but none of them understand how much I need it myself. I am trying to quit cutting and going through major withdrawl and no one knows but me. I really love this poem. 10/5!
Every line in this poem i can relate to..i am always that person looking out for others. im always trying to help the people around me make the right decisions, and chase away their fears and discard of all their sadness, but the truth is-i myslef am the one with the problems and i never show my tears and my disguise has always been on..readign this has made me re evaluate my thinking and maybe i should get help..maybe for once i should put myself before others..well enough of me talkign to my inner self lol..a beautiful poem-very well written..i thank you for writting a poem that i can relate too..trully a job well done..keep it up!