Fighting temptation

All ur poems are short but you get the emotion and the meaning out really well I like this one!
Juls

You had reality written in these lines. Though short you had the truths right there. However though, I'd love to see more lines added to make the poem louder and more powerful, I think this has potential for something more. Still, maybe it's just me. =)

These are strong words used and it helps to make the mood evaporated from these lines much more weighted. I like your works. Thanks for sharing.

It was short but it was very powerful i think you did so good♥

Simple but effective, its very good.

well done

5/5

I think this could have used some more, but for what you have i think it's great 5/5