The paradox

by AlexJ   Dec 21, 2005


Surrounded by walls from every direction
Mastering laws to fight the infection
Oblivious to where the road is heading
The maze holding you might be never ending

Searching for an exit
you still have some hope
The longer you keep running though
you feel like reaching for the rope

Ignorance is driving you insane
you're life's like "the Trial"
You don't understand the game
Existence is your paradox
Dilemma is your life
Wishing you had no concience
it's a doom living in strife

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  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Other great poem..it drew me into reading it very well done my friend. Keep up the great work

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Your first stanza is strong and it drew the reader right into the state where they want more, but I can't say your second stanza is as strong as the rest for I feel that the transition is kind of abrupt to me. Still, maybe it's just me. =)

    I like the meaning behind these lines, something many can relate to. Great set of words used. Thanks, it's a worthy read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey i really enjoyed reading this one. it was really great to read and showed us what you were thinking and very well explained! Strong poem and very talented you are! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by UnWaNtEd

    Hey thanx for the comment....i really like this poem....good work...
    keep it up
    :)
    . . . UnWaNtEd. . .

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem! I really like the second stanza. Keep it up!

    Tiffany.xox.

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