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by TinyDancer46 Jan 9, 2006
Love, romance /
I don't know if this poem is any good... I'm just really upset right now and I have to get it out. I thought things were good now
I thought we'd overcome the bad
Now I see through the illusion
Of the love I thought we had
You told me that you met her
Now you don't know what to do
I smiled and said "Just pick her
I'll be fine not having you"
But I couldn't hold my tears back
So I whispered "Got to go..."
Then I quickly hung the phone up
So my hurting wouldn't show
Now I'm shaking and I'm crying
And I don't know what to do
Cause the truth is, I was lying
I can't make it without you
Nawww u poor thing :(
Awww this poem is sOo sweet. and well sad but its really good
WOW! Took my breath away! Amazing piece!
Wow!! that is telling the truth. potery is away to tell people how you feel. i may be new but i write alot of poems. just let everything out. alot of people know how you fell.
by Cotton Candy Clouds
Wow that was VERY good i mean it had so much emotion and i think a lot of people will be able to relate to it 5/5 <33